St Patrick day

WALT retell a story.
WWBSWW tell the story in our own words.
Planning
Who St Patrick was and what he liked doing and what he didn't like doing
 - where he was born - what his family was like
He liked walking on the beach. He liked whittling his slingshot.
He hated school.
One day,
- didn't go to school
- went to the beach
- pirates came
- stole him and the other girls and boys
- sold him in Ireland to Milchu
- was a shepherd - looked after sheep and pigs (swine)
- started talked to God - trusted God and was happy
- One night, heard God talking to him - told him to go the a ship
- when he was on board, - big storm - ship grounded in France
- crew starving
- Patrick asked God for help
- God sent him pigs and an apple tree- ate pork dinner and apple sauce

Patrick Mc Alpen was born some were in Britain. His parents are rich. His dad is a Roman Soldier. Patrick likes to stroll on the beach but if Patrick goes to school he hates it.One day Patrick didn't go to school he raced off to the beach. Patrick pretended that the farriers Scottish wores were attacking Patrick. SUDDENLY! a  pyrite ship rold among the ground one buccaneer grabbed Patrick and throw him and other boy's and girl's. The pirates took the children to Ireland.